Very... moving. Nice.

Ohh... just realized that you are writing that amazing storyline about those two.
My reverence.

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Made of so much win. <3

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'Tis not through envy of thy happy lot, but being too happy in thine happiness... John Keats "Ode to a Nightingale"

Carpe aptenodytes!

Thank you. I tried to put as much emotion as I could into the piece. ^_^

Yeah, that's probably me. I really like this pairing and writing that story has made me really fall in love with them togethr.

Thank you very much.

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Ah yeeeah, I have nothing intellgent to offer. Okami-chan no baka!

Thank you!

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dragon dragon dragon dragon!

Ah yeeeah, I have nothing intellgent to offer. Okami-chan no baka!

Love emotions and this pic turned out really good.

I know what you're talking about. I was like the same with my fic which i started before I met yours. Than I collapsed a bit because of your talent. Still not got the guts to post. I'm not too original, you know.

Anyway, are you planning new chapters? because I'm eager to read. I'm so much in concern about star crossed, I just wanna know what will happen those unhappy twins and their lovers. *shivers* (yeah, I've just re-read some parts and inserted the pics into my saved copy)

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As long as you're willing to take critique and improve you're writing, you should never let another's talent prevent you from posting your own stuff. I didn't start out with my current abilities, and even through the writing of Star Crossed have improved my storytelling methods.

Believe me, I haven't forgotten about Star Crossed, I have simply allowed myself to be distracted by other projects but i'm planning on getting back on track with Star Crossed (it's almost complete, seriously. Just a few chapters left.) I want to reach the conclusion as much as you, maybe even more than you, want to read it.

(hope the pics fit the mood of the story.)

Also, thank you for faving the pic!

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Ah yeeeah, I have nothing intellgent to offer. Okami-chan no baka!

Thanks for encouragement. Heh, some time I need for posting. I have asked Tess and Kitty for beta and they helped me a lot (once I post, I will take a pic of the corrections Tess made, almost every sentence had some failure although I spellchecked and reread 20 times, ehm). However, it's not the grammar I'm concerned.

I'm completely agree that sometimes we need to be distracted to get fresh energies and ideas. I rather wish you never finish that story. No offence: most likely I would read a new chap every week instead... *ducks from objects you may throw at her for being voracious*

That pairing you made up is absolutely original and so is the plot - I haven't seen the difficulties of ranking before; anyway, not among the Autobots. And yes, the half-spark thing is also a twisted one - that they cannot bond separatedly. *still concerned about their well-being* Oh a solution is so needed!

The pics you did are well fit to and you did a great job in expressing feelings.

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(whew! been a busy few days, sorry about taking so long.)

It's good that you've got someones to help beta your story.

Trust me, I do know about the number of corrections on a page, because I try to be hard on myself (mostly on my more recent chapters,) and I'm not satisfied unless I have a good number of corrections marked on the page.

I've enjoyed my distractions, and I'm really loathing ending the series, but it needs to end for my own piece of mind. I'm not going to throw any objects at you I just hope that when I pick up the pair again you'll continue to enjoy the next story I tell (because Star Crossed is not the only idea I have plodding about my head for them). Star Crossed has already gotten waaay longer than the 10-ish chapters I had planned for them, so it's seriously due for that ending.

I had never seen the pairing taken seriously either, which is why I started the story, nor had I seen much mention of the differences in rank being handled in a relationship. More attention should be paid to these aspects.

(if I may ask, if it is not grammar that has you nervous, than what about your fic does. If you do not wish to discuss it here, feel free to PM me.)

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dragon dragon dragon dragon!

Ah yeeeah, I have nothing intellgent to offer. Okami-chan no baka!

Nice, this is lovely. *faving*